just made it. 5438 words so far. I'm having fun with this story but I'm also still figuring it out, same time as my main character. Stay tuned, this one's
to be continued...
What is Drastic + Dramatic
Thursday, July 01, 2010
Sunday, June 20, 2010
Wednesday, June 09, 2010
Birthday Thanks

Thank You:
God, for making birth and days and blessings for twenty six years. I love you.
Mark, for making the trip out of your way to take us to dinner (Godsend with that rain!)
Friends, for making me warm and fuzzy inside. I love you.
Matt, for...everything. For making me feel, seriously, like a princess today.
Bakers and candlestick makers, for making edible goodness, and wicks to make wishes.
Mom and Dad, for making me. I love you.
Wednesday, June 02, 2010
Violet Shadow
May's short story, Violet Shadow, is 5099 words. Perfect! I could probably cut out 99 words easily, but I'm pleased with this draft for now because there are plenty of places where I did cut back, where i could have expanded. This to me is the kind of story that could go into novel one day. We'll see! I hope you enjoy it, oh lovely blog followers!!
Sunday, May 23, 2010
Another Emily's Words
Heart! We will forget him!
You and I -- tonight!
You may forget the warmth he gave --
I will forget the light!
When you have done, pray tell me
That I may straight begin!
Haste! lest while you're lagging
I remember him!
E Dickinson
You and I -- tonight!
You may forget the warmth he gave --
I will forget the light!
When you have done, pray tell me
That I may straight begin!
Haste! lest while you're lagging
I remember him!
E Dickinson
Sunday, May 02, 2010
Sipping Spring

Low cumulonimbus pillows
Tucked under blue sheets
Form fluffy white shapes
To the trained, shielded eye
Squinting and causing
Wrinkles to crease
Crows feet directing
The sun's balmy rays
Onto freckled cheeks
Into rouging ears
Warming from soul
To skin that feels
The desultory breeze
Inhaling and absorbing
Every current event
Drifting here to there
Plotting a trail of
Temporary stones
Stepping across
An undisturbed pond
Where the willows
Catch the rill of scents,
Comb the tangle through,
And tremble as if to sneeze
From the memory
That tickles the nose
And tugs the corners of
Two lips red as
Tulips curling open
To bumble bee kisses
While grasshoppers leap
Over rocks and twigs
And ants march to the drum
Of the heart of earth
In spongy dirt
Where worms fill orders
To deliver flowers
Their fertile diet,
Tiny roots winding down
The freeway of life
Pulsing under foot
Pressing softly in
To tender green blades
That bow to the breeze
Sweeping through thin clouds
Spread over endless canvas
Airbrushed blue
Arrayed in sunlit beams.
Friday, April 30, 2010
April's Short Story
The Advocate (just under 1700 words) is kind of cheating...I wrote a rough draft months, maybe years ago. The writing needed polishing, but the idea was already born. It is also "cheating" if you think of what happens in strictly "real world" applications. The Advocate is an analogy. Parts of the "history"--location, specific crime, time of era--are intentionally left unmentioned. This was to provide flexibility in interpretation. If you read this as fiction, then you'll be less critical, I hope, in possible applications. Most analogies aren't perfect in their applications, remember this. Then maybe you'll like this. Cheers!
Sunday, April 18, 2010
Relay
Tuesday, April 13, 2010
Husband Merenade

Twenty-six years have passed
When we couldn't share stories.
Soon as two authors write one life
Let's make it an adventure:
Front page sensations every morning.
Be patient while we wait
And after you know me, too.
I'm not perfect, but my love
will supply everything required
To make life's marinade sweet.
I want to marinate you.
Don't ask, "Will you marry me?"
No,
I won't "one time event" you.
I do,
I will always marrynate you,
And I'm already mixing
The sweet with the sour,
Waiting to soak and soften.
Sit on my right and I'll scratch your back;
On my left and I'll finger a love serenade,
My voice a soft wind in the
Sunshine chords of this ukulele.
Or walk next to me, either side,
Holding the hand that is yours
To have, for every want and need.
Hug me.
No, hold me in your arms.
Better yet, fold me in your heart.
Stand behind me when you wait
For my makeup to be finished;
You'll be ready, already,
But wait for me with me,
With your arms around me.
When I stand behind you
My head will rest on you,
On a soft blade of shoulder.
My arms closed around you,
I will never be able to let go.
I will love you--
If you only knew how much--
So don't worry or wonder or wander,
Because our paths will meet.
Or maybe they have...
Our hearts will meet.
And the moment will be
Sensational.
Friday, April 09, 2010
Curious Title. Second Glance
First line, second chance:
First impression already surmising,
Opinion forming,
Interest...waning? piqued?
Judgement realizing,
Persuasion reorganizing.
A clever, winning line.
Your mind accepts,
Wandering beyond the words,
Releasing hold of title and letters,
Ink merging into memory
Smearing, stamping, circulating
Images flashing, resurfacing;
Silent movie, admission for one.
And then it's over
Before you're done.
Over, but never ending
Because you read each word
Transfusing into your veins.
Only the words know where you bleed;
They rush to the pain...
But do not always heal.
Words stampede at full speed
Then tiptoe like bedtime kisses,
Expand the imagination's lung
Then choke the rising passion;
Steal speech, tie the tongue,
Numb its tip, prick the nose,
Fill the eyes, dissolve.
Your eyes absorb the title.
Your heart transmits the letters.
Your veins bide the pressure.
Your blood craves another dose.
Your disease can be remitted;
Your nerves wait for the word.
First impression already surmising,
Opinion forming,
Interest...waning? piqued?
Judgement realizing,
Persuasion reorganizing.
A clever, winning line.
Your mind accepts,
Wandering beyond the words,
Releasing hold of title and letters,
Ink merging into memory
Smearing, stamping, circulating
Images flashing, resurfacing;
Silent movie, admission for one.
And then it's over
Before you're done.
Over, but never ending
Because you read each word
Transfusing into your veins.
Only the words know where you bleed;
They rush to the pain...
But do not always heal.
Words stampede at full speed
Then tiptoe like bedtime kisses,
Expand the imagination's lung
Then choke the rising passion;
Steal speech, tie the tongue,
Numb its tip, prick the nose,
Fill the eyes, dissolve.
Your eyes absorb the title.
Your heart transmits the letters.
Your veins bide the pressure.
Your blood craves another dose.
Your disease can be remitted;
Your nerves wait for the word.
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